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中考写作练习|浦东新区2018-2019学年度第一学期期末质量抽查

发布时间:2019-03-22 作者:昂立外语 来源于:昂立外语网站
VII. Writing (作文) (共20分)
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ How lucky I am to have _________”( 我多么?#20197;四?#22815;拥有 ________’ 为题,写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格, 请在答题纸?#20064;?#20316;文标题补充完整,如 : a true friend, a warm family, an interesting book….)
  在学习和生活中你可能因为拥有一位真诚的朋友、一个温暖的家、一本有趣的书等而感到?#20197;耍?#35831;选择一个方面谈谈自己的亲身经历,并?#24471;?#20026;何感到?#20197;恕?
 
(注意: 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
 
The following is for reference only( 以下表达仅供参考 )
be satisfied with …..
encourage sb to do sth
do sb a favor
with the help of ……..
步步 为赢
1. Among all the people that I know, no one deserves my respect more than my Chinese teacher.
2. Jack , whom I respect very well, is a man with expressive eyes and is always wearing a smile which greatly shows that he is easy to get along with. The reason why I feel lucky to have a teacher is his patience and kindness to his students.
 I still remember that period of time when I failed in my Chinese exam, I was lost in a sad condition and couldn't pull it off.3.   It was Jack who noticed my deep disappointment hidden in my heart and gave me encouragement as well as learning skills in spite of his busy work. In the end, I managed to gain my confidence and took a fresh look at failures ever since.
Above all, 4. despite the fact that I have been away from school for many years, my memory and respect for him will never fade away.
亮点解析
1.  否定词加比较级表示最高级,强调我对老师的尊重
2.  用了限制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句来描述 老师的性格特征
3.  用了强调句强调Jack
4.  用了despite the fact that 同位语从句,让文采更加的出色。
 
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